[BALUG-Talk] Linux references in an essay

[Baptiste]

Here are sentences about Linux I wrote in an essay. I'd like to know what
you think of those..
The essay is about the principle of open sources as applied to the education
system.
It's not scientific.. it's for an eng.1A class....


Parts of my essay:

<< * Linux, as an operating system, provides a more customizable environment
for knowledgeable users, by opposition to *Apple's Mac OS* and *Microsoft
Windows*. Even though it isn't as famous, it is widely used for
organizations that need secured and specific settings of computer
networks.>>

- this is a footnote in my text. The aim is to connect it to something the
reader might know.
- I should add something about the "one laptop per child" to it..


+ can I say: Google increases its power by *opening its sources*??
Is it right to say *opening their sources* here?*
*
or is it right to say :     "Open source systems"


Thank you so much!


baptiste
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